First Grade Learning Expectations

Writing Student Master 11c from the K-3 Writing Toolkit
Commission on Student Learning

Here is an example of a first draft of a paper from another one of Terry's classmates, Ana. Ana's paper is about her favorite food, hamburgers.

Sample Writing

Ana's paper is beginning to take shape. It gives you details about one topic. Ana has also tried to put her ideas into real sentences. You can see that she still has a lot of work to do, though. She will have to check her spelling and grammar, and think about other ideas she might want to add.